Good work, but voice acting.
I love all the backgrounds and little photos and everything, I see you went and put in extras for laughs and it's pretty funny,
It's very monotone through the movie,
and when that happens halfway through, you tend to think why am i watching this (like i could be doing something productive)or ok, so...
With the Voice acting try to add more life and not like you were just talking in a mic.
It's not horrible or bad, it just could've loads funnier with a tad more exaggerated lines and what not with pauses, tone change, and all that good stuff.
And the writing is funny without a doubt, but they dont sell over with the VA.
And i stress this the most on the News anchors and Supervillian at the beginning i dunno what they are feeling if they are surprised, sarcastic, scared i dunno..
And i was really wanting to laugh at the villain but the VA was just dull. Maybe give him more life and be more cartoonish villain, maybe with a semi-english pompous accent or something i dunno. Just more life.
That is all.
Great job though 7/5 just to help you out.
It was good but not the best
It would have been much more enjoyable if the caption baloons didn't disappear so quickly cause i was more focused on quickly reading everything than enjoying it.
I really like weebl and bob too
Just slow it down a little bit.
Good job though
ARE PEOPLE SERIOUSLY HATING??!?!?
ARE YOU KIDDING ME?!
THIS WAS DOPE
Everything was funny down to the voices,
but my favorite part was at the end on the phone call
I couldn't stop laughing, keep doing what your doing..
people say there's no political humor.. i don't know if they are watching the same videos, they are whack keep it up
Admire the hard work in drawing every frame,
That's pretty dope..
I think it's a little TOO dramatic for my likings
Cool stuff though, original music would've helped, cool though
THE NEXT BEST THING ON NEWGROUNDS!!
I loved it..
Ha nobody wearsthe open circulatory system anymore lol
And th eblind deaf dumb.. ha i kept rewinding it..
But the bird poop was so unexpected and funny.. I WAS AUGHIN SO HARD
I loved it.. Keep it going
Ok.. Sorry to Nit-Pic but
I like you should make thescreen bigger..
Cause it's like 90% close up shots..
I understand character detail and emotions.. but its close up after close up after really close up..
And that can get confusing especially in fight scenes..
A more wide range shot in certain parts to show off the scenery and also during fights to make attacks more complete instead of showing just the release and the reaction
That was the only thing..
But regardless it was an amazing video keep it up
Are You Kiddin Me?!?!
9's and 10's for this junk..
Get funnier. Most of this stuff was irrelevant and random..
with just random sound clips..
Funny my butt
Oh yea and there's more food than fruit, especially apples and bananas which you guys have a fascination for.
Step Your Game Up..
Kappaho eh? that's a pretty lame name right there, chief.
All for it!
Amesome man i looked at some of your other work before this.. and i've always been a fan.
And I love how you put the black people into the main characters..
The artwork kinda looks like static shock but it's more mature and badass..
I was just thinkin about when you were going to put more work on here.
Awesome.. Let me know if you want to use my music that i have on here.. or my voice i can do a good job with that.
If you want to hear my voice here's my music myspace
Not even funny
I'll give you two stars for the time and work
But for real man? If you find that as comedy i don't know what your home life is like..
There's no reason or motive why his dad would be doing it or even thee in the first place..
Come on man, blowjob joke.. Can we please mature?
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